I need critiques !

Hello,
What do you think about my shop CocoDollz ?
I would like improve my shop (description, keyword, photos, ..) and i need opinion to do that :D.
Thank you for your help.
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I really like your work. I know you have a lot of items but I would suggest adding even more. My shop really picked up the more I added. I also think a lot of your items would look wonderful with an old aged wood background...nothing fancy just some old barnwood panel or frame, etc...try it you can see if you like it. I wish you many, many sales!
~Lynn
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ooo thank you Amarigoldlife..i hope many sales :p
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I love your shop.
I do think you could work on the titles.
I think you have too many that are exactly the same. The Bunny Rabbits for instance...all of them have basically the same title. Maybe change them up a bit. Even though the listings are the same...the titles should vary from the next...it will open up your search visibility from what I understand.
Just what I noticed.
Good luck!
Pearle♥
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Thank you PearlesPainting for your advice. I will do that for the titles.
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Coco,

I agree with Pearle. Fun, colorful items, but your titles need work so that you can be found in Etsy's search.

For instructions on how to write tags, titles and descriptions from Etsy's admin: http://www.etsy.com/blog/en/2011/shop-makeover-titles-descriptions-and-tags/

Good luck!

Aman
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Thank you AlmondCrafts. I read the instructions.
I worked on my titles. It was difficult because my english is not excellent :(.
But if i understand well, i have to describe with precision on the title my item. The order of the words are importants too. I hope it's better now ! I will see my statistiques soon :p
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I think they're adorable! I'll keep you shop in mind for gifts. The paper dolls would be perfect for my niece and my sister loves silly odd looking stuft toys

I agree with the other comments.
I've noticed other shops with plush item name them which makes it all the more unique. :)

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i made some changes. I hope it's better now ?
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