Tracey- I really like the front page of your website. The only "negative" thing I can say is your about page. It doesn't look as professional as the rest of your website. I don't like the little Etsy widget you have there. Since you have a page for your shop, I think that is unnecessary and makes things look a bit cluttered.
Maybe some pictures of yourself and your work area, works in progress, etc. would help. Break the paragraphs up with pics centered instead of the sides of the page.
Not saying my website is perfect by any means but this is my About page for reference of what I am trying to say. I need to add some works in progress shots, etc. to mine.
http://www.abigailsatticaccessories.com/p/about.html
