I'd like some feedback on this item

[Former_Member]

I just added a Mother's Day card. I'd like some feedback on the price, tags, and description and any other opinion or improvement you could suggest would be great. I really want to amp up my sales this year so any feedback is welcomed.

https://www.etsy.com/listing/124734238/mothers-day-card-in-blue-and-yellow

[LaurasPaperCreations]

Pretty card!

Personally, I keep all my prices to the quarter, 4.90 seems off to me. I myself would go with 5.00 and keep everything even.

For your tags, would anyone search "A2" or "small" when looking for Mother's Day cards?
Tags I would use:
mothers day card
card for mom
card for grandmother
card for stepmom
butterfly card
hand made card
blue butterfly card
card with ribbon
blue ribbon card
happy mothers day

I would beef up the description, maybe explain how the card was created.

Out of complete curiousity ~ how are you shipping so you don't flatten the beautiful bow?

[Former_Member]

GORGEOUS card! Beautiful images, and prices seem fair to me! I think your tags could be a little more effective. Most of them are one word, I would type those words into the search bar and see what comes up. For example, butterfly is super generic and chances are you wont pop up on the first page (at least for long) with that tag. I would try butterfly card or something. (I would do some search on specific keywords, instead of taking my advice-I really need to work on my own tags!) But I'm pretty sure "A2" and "small" wont get you found at all! Make sure you mention everywhere that its a handmade OOAK card too! Seems simple, but I think it will really help your sales!

[Former_Member]

Very pretty card I would go with $5 on it. Title it Mother's Day Butterfly Card and everythi ng the other ladys said..:)

[wildwomanbeads]

I'd also round off the price at $5 and add to your title and tags that it's handmade or artisan made because that will appeal to some folks looking for a special Mom.

[Former_Member]

include the tage "gift for mom" it will likely get you showcased in one Etsy's Mother's Day registers; I was featured in several of the Christmas ones and it did a huge boost to views! Also, you *might* want to include if this card can be mailed regular postage- the bow makes me wonder if it's a card that I could mail without additional postage? Last thing, closer the mother's day you might even want to include a service that would mail the cards directly to mom with their message included.... perfect for last minute shoppers!

[Former_Member]

Would you pay $5 for it yourself, though?

[Former_Member]

I would pay $4.50 for it. I would also like to see a separate shipping price for Canada. Tags: what about blue and yellow? Blank greeting card?

[Former_Member]

I actually just did a price check for shipping to Canada, it would be $7.45 plus packaging materials. International shipping from the U.S. has gone up :/

[AttentionGetting]

Maybe offer a set of 3 for $15 for buyers to send to their mother, grandmother, mother-in-law, that would offset the postage. I would also do something more interesting with the envelope, even just stamping Happy Mother's Day across the bottom.

[MariasWorkshop]

I love your card, I love the colors and the theme. The ribbon looks a little bulky to me (just my opinion, please do not get offended). I would put a price of $4.75 or $4.90. The $5.00 would scare me off. Yes, I know it is just a few cents difference =).

Best of luck.

[Former_Member]

I agree with everyone...though like the idea of having a set of (3) cards for $15. This way, they may consider other members of their family and loved ones. This can certainly be an option to having a single card ($4.75). Also, the "A2" can throw off a few people, though I know what it means, but the average person does not. Hope this helps. Best of Luck!

[Former_Member]

@Maria, I'm not offended at all, everyone has different tastes and styles