luxibloom, I think (forgive me) your photos would be better if you start with a close-up. Also, I'm quite confused with this item because it looks like two different pendants - which are you selling? The first photo doesn't do it justice because it's too far away for me to know what it is at first glance, and some people will just move on, not bother looking further.
http://www.etsy.com/listing/80370152/enchanted-fairy-tale-alice-andI wonder, also, if using blue jeans as a background is restricting your demographic? I straight away thought - aha, she's selling to youngsters who wear jeans all the time. Now, maybe that is EXACTLY who you want to market to, in which case well done. But if it isn't, then maybe change the background?