Wow, William...Your shop is beautiful. The best advice I received when starting out was to learn everything I could about tags, titles, descriptions, and great photos (although your photos are already perfect). The Etsy community is extremely helpful in getting your shop in good order. I found it very worthwhile to join teams to learn all you can about being found in searches. It is a lot of work and plenty of trial and error, but worth every hour spent to feel the excitement of that first sale.
Wishing lots of sales for you.