I'd first suggest that you work on your titles and tags.
For example I really have no idea what an
""Imagine Inspirational Bookmark Printable Digital"" is at all.
https://www.etsy.com/listing/150015639/imagine-inspirational-bookmark-printableAnd if its a bookmark, why would I want a digital one, unless it worked on a digital book?
When I'm writing titles I try to write them as if I was saying to a friend 'Hey look at the cool new xxxxx' that I've got in the shop! Or as if I were asking at the local shop for the item.
Then I'll take the key words and phrases from that title and use them as my tags.
The same goes for your
""Custom What Would Lisbeth Do Lisbeth Salander Girl With The Dragon Tattoo leather cuff bracelet""
https://www.etsy.com/listing/91165059/custom-what-would-lisbeth-do-lisbeth If you were looking for a leather cuff bracelet, would you search for a 'custom what would lisbeth do lisbeth salanader girl with the dragon... etc?
Probably not. You would search for a 'leather cuff bracelet'. I would also take a good look at your pricing on your items as they seem rather low. If the bracelet is retailing for $10 are you really covering the cost of materials and your time? Even if you only pay yourself $10 per hour that's still a very low price for a quality item.
I would also be careful about selling items using trademarked names or names of personalities. Using names such as 'breakfast club', Lady Gaga, Harry Potter, etc all require the permission of the owner or trademark holder.
And just because 'other people are doing it' doesn't mean that its legal.
You may find that by working through the Critique Your Own Shop - Shop Critique Check List at
etsymentors.blogspot.com/p/critique-your-own-shop.html
that it will help you with your shop.