Help with this listing?

[GirlpowerKnits]

Hello Teamies!

Can I ask for help with this listing? I cannot seem to sell this bear, I just re-listed and did a total makeover this morning.

I'd appreciate any help I can get - I need to sell this because I don't have much room to store it, I recently moved.

https://www.etsy.com/listing/99468184/15-off-patchwork-teddy-bear-hand-knit

[Former_Member]

what a lovely bear, but the photo is badly cropped, i can´t see the bear´s feet other than that i don´t see what´s wrong with it...

[viadeinavigli]

Emily,

* your titel: 15% OFF! Patchwork Teddy Bear, Hand Knit, Rainbow Multicolor, Jointed Embroidered Soft Plush Waldorf, Home Decoration, Christmas Grandma

* my titel: Handmade teddy bear, knitted colorful teddy bear, handmade kids toy, soft animal, stuffed animal, nursery decoration

Try to think what a custumer search when he has to find your item. ..... and at least one time HANDMADE in your title.

Good luck

[GirlpowerKnits]

Thank you Barbara - I wondered about that.

@ Via - I'll look at some of those. I'm actually targeting this to past the nursery, my items are "hand knit" vs. "handmade" - wonder if it makes a difference.

[SpangGangDesigns]

But, Emily, you have to consider what terms the customer will search for. It wouldn't cross my mind to call it "hand knit". Think like a buyer and don't get caught up on the technical terms of what (you) want it to be called.

[JewelMeShop]

I would focus on the title. I think most of the people don't search a discount but the item first. If you want to put discount in your title maybe it's better at the end of the title. You could also use etsy on sale in order not to take space on your title.
I also agree with Via, kids toy would be a very effective word in your title and tag.

[Former_Member]

What about trying the term "lovey"? That is what I searched when looking for a soft doll targeted toward my infant/ toddler daughter.

Also, I have had much more success recently with titles that aren't stuffed.

"Soft Teddy Bear for Nursery, Lovey"