Schuylar,
I, too, am fairly new to Etsy and I'm also an Iowan. A suggestion I'd like to make is that you visit some other vintage shops here on Etsy and look at how they're doing things. I think that you need to provide more descriptions for your items. The two I looked at barely had a sentence. I'd like to know a little more. Perhaps you might add where you found the vintage item. Be sure to fully describe each item. Remember your customer only has what you say about it and the picture you provide - they can't touch it, pick it up, smell it. All those things you got to do when you hunted for it. Also, you don't say much in your about section. Tell us about why you got into vintage. Why is it a passion of yours. Why should we buy from you. Your tags and title (SEO) should reflect one another, and should be every phrase you can come up with that you think a customer would search for your item with but don't repeat words if you can possibly avoid it. I would be willing to show you what I mean by critiquing one of your items if you would like. Just convo me. Hope I was helpful.
Laura