Help me!!!

[Former_Member]

Hi please visit my store and tell me how I can improve it and recommend it to change, thanks for your help

http://www.etsy.com/shop/BurbujaDesigns?ref=si_shop

[Former_Member]

Right off the bat I noticed the backgrounds in your pictures are very distracting. There's already alot of lines in your pieces so having a striped background takes away from them. The underpants look great!

[Zehland]

Your shop is lovely and you have beautiful items.

However, I noticed in the descriptions, the English version often does not make sense and the grammar is not well constructed. I'm sure English is not your native language.

That might be a problem for some buyers because they won't know what you mean. If you have a friend who is fluent in English, you might ask them to help you with translations. Good luck!

[Former_Member]

You have some really good items!

I saw that you photographed some things in front of a white background. You might try shooting almost everything with a white background. That's what I do, and I think it makes the shop feel more cohesive, and it's easy to make things look crisp and clean with a white background.

Anyway, you have some great items, and it's really impressive that it's all handmade. I bet you'll be having some sales before too long. Good luck!

- Danielle

[Former_Member]

Cute panties :) I agree that the background is distracting. I find that the items that get the most attention in my shop have plain backgrounds. :) Good luck :)

[Former_Member]

Thanks to everyone for the tips, I change the pictures tomorrow
and get better descriptions,

[PrintablesByPhanie]

I received a thorough and extremely helpful critique from Sandy @ SASsy Critiques team. I'm already getting tons more views from taking her advice.

www.etsy.com/teams/7702/sassy-critiques/discuss/

It may take her a day or two to get back to you but she will.