Hello!!
I think the thing that is most effecting you is your photos. You have beautiful bags for sale, but your photos are not showing them in a flattering way. I would suggest using natural light in the morning on a neutral background with a tripod or some sort of make-shift stand.
I think this is the biggest part of selling on etsy and, unfortunately, if your photos are not the greatest it's hard to sell.
Like I said, your bags are beautiful!!! Don't let my advice get you down, but if you work on them day by day i'm sure you will see an improvement :)
Best of luck!!