Welcome, Laurie, and congratulations on your bursary! You do indeed create unique and wonderful pieces of wearable art.
In order to succeed in any online environment, you absolutely must learn to use good SEO and tags in your listings. There is no substitute for it. Right now your items will remain largely invisible because your tags aren't doing anything for you.
As I tell everyone here, you should go to the Relevancy & SEO team and learn as much as you can about picking the best keywords.
https://www.etsy.com/teams/11352/relevancy-and-seo-for-all-etsy-shopsThen I also suggest that you read about my method, which goes a little further than they do on the Relevancy team.
https://cleverruthie.wordpress.com/2014/09/08/a-sweet-secret-to-seo-and-etsy-happiness/One other thing, and maybe this is just me, but you look rather unhappy in your photos. I presume you want to look dramatic, and maybe that appeals to some buyers, but it doesn't to me! I'd rather see a Mona Lisa-type smile -- it makes me feel happy and more like opening up my wallet.