Hello and Help! What do you think of my shop?

[VintageFabricStudios]

I need some honest feed back from those who have been there and done that. I am starting to build a cohesive shop (I think!) and would like another set of eyes (or like 50 sets!) to check out what I got and see if you think it's working.

Photos, descriptions, tags, profile, price, products, info -- it's all fair game.
What would you do different or what do you think is working for me???

http://www.etsy.com/shop/BlueBirdSews

Thanks!!

[Former_Member]

One of the things that I would recommend is to get a cohesive set of photos. Because the patterns of your quilts are very busy, a good solid background would probably be better than some of your existing backgrounds.

Also the second thing I noticed was many of your titles are alike. You may want to look at sellers with like items and see how they word their items just to see what is out there.

[VintageFabricStudios]

Thanks Amanda Jayne! Both very good observations!

[Former_Member]

Beautiful quilts!

This is completely a personal preference thing, but if you are the one running the shop and writing your shop intro, why are you referring to yourself in the third person? For Etsy, this is just strange, since everything is supposed to be made and run by one person, the person a customer wants to have a relationship with. In an online forum where this personal relationship is tricky, don't make it trickier by throwing up that roadblock.

[VintageFabricStudios]

Thank you Adyan! Dully noted & changed. Because I think you are right - I'm not royalty for goodness sake!
But getting out of the first person helped me to write something about myself that was true....it's still hard to put myself out there completely!
Thanks again!