Hi Jugosa,
First..Your banner is very pretty but I don't see the connection with your handmade jewelry. Can you incorporate your jewelry into the lovely banner?
Also, Jugosa.Etsy does not stand out on the banner. It is hard to see because of the darkness of the font.
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Cheers and best of luck to you.