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First Impressions Please<3

I have hit a store makeover(or under :) brick wall-
Please take a glance and let me know of your immediate/first impression of my shop:

All suggestions are both welcome and appreciated!
Well- (unless horribly vulgar or rude- Then keep them to yourself)

Thanks!
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I love your jewelry! It's a beautiful vintage feel and the pictures are fabulous! So that's my first impression... :)
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I think your shop is lovely!

Very nice job on your pictures!

I wish you the best of luck!
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Love your vintage pieces.The photography is stunning. I really love this photo

https://www.etsy.com/listing/126427416/vintage-style-light-pretty-pink-flower?ref=shop_home_active


Is there a way you could design your banner with this same pretty vintage theme? Its just so beautiful it would be the cherry on top for your shop!
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1AEON
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HI Cerulean Plume,
Great shop! Looks Awesome! So first I though there is nothing to say, let's tell her, it's great and that's the end of it.
Then I clicked on one the item, and I think the listing was odd being very long with all those lines, it was a little hard on my eyes and I felt like you are giving the readers a little homework to do. It is different from what I normally see, so in that regard it's a great idea to stand out, yet I couldn't get through the listing, just clicked away instead. I would adjust it with making them easier for potential buyers. Also noticed that some of the items have only 3 photos. I would fill up all the slots, again just looks nicer and I was told a same some times ago:) I would use close ups and perhaps how it looks on model..more variations.
I would harmonize the (either the style or the color) of the avatar/banner, so it's more balanced.
It looks like you don't have a twitter page or it's just not on your shop, underneath your banner.
I hope I'm not coming down too harsh, most of these things were my issues back then as well (and I'm sure I still have a million other hah), but that is why I'm noticing them.
Hope they help:) and don't forget to have fun.
Gabe
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I've seen a lot of people say they wouldn't buy a product that a person was wearing.
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1AEON
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Oh ok, make sense, my bad, I don't know much about jewelry. For example I'm not sure if the prices are high or low, that could be something to think about too.
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Thanks guys so much for the first impressions feedback so far :)

-1AEON
I really liked what you said too, It has been something that I have really been thinking about in the past. I just get really really (ok really) bored when I read a paragraph-form description. (severe attention deficit here)

I mean, I'm a huge buyer on here too and sometimes I love the descriptions but sometimes they just go on and on about the same thing so...

I do think my descriptions are a shy bit too cold though and I forgot that was something I really needed to rework so thanks so much
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