First Impression needed.

[Agahozo]

I opened my shop in this week, I have never had anyone to tell me How to. Anyone I showed my shop was my family member or a close friend whom I don't think they can give me a realistic view. So I would appreciate any critical views from someone else

[StuckOnSilver]

Hi, Marie,congratulations on launching your shop!

https://www.etsy.com/listing/510626542/jewelry-holder-unique-basket-glass?ref=shop_home_active_9

Brighten your photos.
Include dimensions

All the best!

[LeedsRadio]

Fix your typos and grammatical error. I read this

"Because of its finest, this basket or this Agaseke (In Kinyarwanda) is one of emblems of Rwanda, it is featured in National Emblem and 5,000 Rwandan francs Notes."

4 times and I still don't understand what you are trying to say. Get a native speaker of English to help if you have to.

Also don't use the same text in every listing

[JoniAndCo]

Hi Marie,

I love your shop. Your baskets are wonderful!
I also love your mission statement and reading about the history of why you are doing your shop.
I wish you all the success in the world.
Your header is really great. It tells the story in a bright picture!
Keep at it!