You have a beautiful shop. The major thing I noticed was your shipping. I looked at the donut soap. $7.95 for the first item and $6.95 for each additional item. So essentially if a US customer purchased two of your donut listing they would have to pay $14.90 in shipping. That's way too much. Can you ship flat rate?
Another thing I noticed was your titles/tags. To be seen more you need to have your first 2-3 title words match your first tag. So for example:
Luxury Soap, Doughnut Soap, Dessert soap, Novelty Soap, party favors
Your first tag needs to be "luxury soap" then "doughnut soap"
I'm in the US and we spell it "donut."
Your bath bomb listing:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/93857150/bath-bomb-bath-fizzy-green-tea-and?ref=v1_other_1You have the first two tags "bath" and "bomb" Etsy wants you to use 2 and 3 word tags.
I've found it helpful and have read that when people put links in their listings people stay in their shop longer and buy more. So you could put
For more bath bombs click here:
(and put your shop section bath bombs here)
I hope this helps. You have beautiful items. Etsy isn't as easy to sell on as it used to be. Do you blog? Social network? Do you advertise locally via flyers, biz cards, etc?