Feedback about shop

[ArcaneMemoryDesigns]

Hey Friends, I have been doing a lot of work updating my shop over the last two months; talking new photos, adding new items, working on the arrangement of my pictures, and creating new titles for each item. I am also working on pricing and descriptions. It would be great o get feedback on any of these things or anything else that catches your eye. I would really like to continue improving my shop especially right now with the holidays coming up. I would be so grateful for any of your thoughts and feelings.

Warm Regards, Bonnie

[ohmyclumsyheart]

I like shops to look clean, simple and consistent.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/95445145/bohemian-inspired-ooak-necklace-and

I think this listing in particular looks lovely and I think perhaps you could run this style through your whole shop to make it more consistent. Personally, I dislike mixing backdrops - especially when light AND dark ones are used.

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[Former_Member]

Hi, Bonnie! I think your jewelry is unique and interesting. I think you are on the right track with titles and descriptions. I agree with Sophie about your photos. I think the lighter background really makes your pieces pop. Other than that I think you probably just need to add more items to up your chances of being found. :)

[sunsetshutterbug]

Hi Bonnie, ditto on the backgrounds.

You might want to rework your titles and move the name of the actual object closer to the first 3 words.

So for this item

http://www.etsy.com/listing/109301979/modern-brass-snake-bead-unisex-bracelet

I see it's a bracelet, you but don't even see it the word bracelet if you were looking at the listing unless you clicked on the image. I see a lot of jewelery and I'm not really educated in the jewelry business and if I was looking for a bracelet, I'd probably search "Ethnic Bracelet" if I wanted yours.

Also, I'm not sure about the dried leaf and pine cone thing. A picture of someone wearing it would be great so I could get an idea of what it looks like on. Or even a model wearing it so I could also get an idea (i'm ignorant when it comes to fashion) of what clothes it would go great with.

Just be mindful of your backgrounds! I saw one with a white laced/red background and it makes it too busy and hard for me to see what the actual image if supposed to be.

Good luck!