Feedback about page

[Former_Member]

Hi everyone!
I just published my about page. I can use your feedback, can you please help me?

- is the English correctly?
- how about the pictures?
- what do you think of the story? Is it all clear?

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https://www.etsy.com/shop/papierdier/about
Thank you so much!

[StuckOnSilver]

Hi, Marjolein, your English is very clear and your about page is superb!! Way to go!!
Keep up the beautiful work,
Bev

[LaceTrimmedLife]

Hi Marjolein, I think you about page is very well done. I think your description of the studio makes the reader want to go there too and I think that feeling will translate into people wanting to buy your beautiful work.

[Former_Member]

Wow, thank you both so much for your very nice words!!

[Former_Member]

Very nice page! It gives a vibe of getting a virtual tour of your studio.

If anything, I suggest you add a close-up of your work surface. Spread some of your projects and materials around (artistically, of course) to give a "close up" view.

So many possibilities! If you have access to a camera with a wide aperture lens, you can focus it on a particular drawing in the center of the workspace, with the rest blurring out. Balance the composition of the lines of the paper edges with your pens, pen holder, desk edge, etc, then edit the colours to give it a warm, sunny tone.

Sorry, my camera has been out of commission for a while, and I'm feeling the photography juices! Your studio pictures are inspiring!

[Former_Member]

Thank you Julia!
You must be a good photographer I can tell by how you write your ideas down ;)!. Very helpful to me.