Descriptions, HELP please

[Former_Member]

I keep going back and forth between thinking I have too much information to sift through on my listings and then again thinking people need to know how much research I have put into these aromatherapy zodiac blends. Below I have two different ways of explaining, please tell me which approach you like better. thank you SO Much for all your help!

http://www.etsy.com/listing/72785653/zodiac-sign-bath-salt-gemini-horoscope
(a smaller wording approach)

and

http://www.etsy.com/listing/73527397/zodiac-sign-aromatherapy-bath-salts
(my original way of listing with all the info included)

Any perspective is welcome!

[OhKuol]

I like the first description because it is straight forward and simple, the second description is very informative, but if I were a buyer, I might be overwhelmed with all the text. They're great descriptions by the way, great job !

[Former_Member]

I do like the first description..simple is good. I dont think buyers would love to read that much stuff. you can probably put those detail in a card or something and attach it to the package and mail to your customer.

[Former_Member]

I actually like the second one!

http://www.etsy.com/listing/73527397/zodiac-sign-aromatherapy-bath-salts

I am, however, partial to longer descriptions. I like the use of headings and my perspective is that those who want to read the whole thing will, and those who want to skim can use the headings to navigate to the information they find most pertinent to them.

I recently re-did my descriptions. They were previously in paragraph, narrative format, and are now in bullet point format with headings.