Critque if you have a moment

[ShopTaylourMade]

Hello Everyone
I new to Etsy and I am trying to make my shop more appealing, and I would like a critque on the following link especially...

http://www.etsy.com/listing/68383097/title-memories-of-spring-12x16-limited

Only listing up with the group shot...do you think it's good or bad...this grouping has the piece in it, but not all of my items are framed. Would you use a group shot in other posting where the item for sale is not in the picture? (would be a different group picture)

I don't want to list to much and update everything...lol I think I'm on update #5 so far, and I've been a member for 8 days..lol
Thank you in advance for your advice, and have a wonderful weekend
Taylour =)

Any advice will be appreciated!!
Thank you in advance =)

[Former_Member]

hi! i think everything looks good.
if you are using a group shot, then just mention in the description that the sale is only for whichever item it is. if you look at my shop, i did that for the rosette items.
i think that you could write in your 'about' section alittle bit more about you as a person. i have read that that is helpful- makes potential buyers see you as a person too.
i'm new at this all too (and have updated a bunch of times too), so i hope this is helpful. i'd take any constructive criticism you could throw my way if you wanted!