Hi Nicole, I just took a look. Your descriptions and policies are professional, but your titles need some tweaking. SEO-wise, it is not a good idea to put 'free shipping' at the beginning. Some other titles also have 'clutch' or 'headband' as the 4rth word; I think they should be one of the first 3.
I like your wooden background, but the others are too busy. The brick wall is visually overwhelming. Photos are so important on etsy!
I could be wrong, but I think there is a lot of competition in your category. With 20+ listings, it is hard to get found. But you can look other shops up, and see what exactly they sell, how they present their stuff in photos, and what titles they have.
Okay, this is a start, and hopefully someone else will be able to give some more advice.
Btw, weekends are not necessarily the best time to ask questions here; weekdays more people are in the forums. ALso, if you don't get more general critiques, ask more specific questions, and you might get better results. Good luck to you!
