Critique Please

[threesistersharvest]

New to your team and Etsy since the end of Oct. We would love some advice as to shop overall look and items. Any ideas would be greatly appreciated!

[Former_Member]

Hi, I'm new as well. I think the overall appearance of your shop is very nice. My only suggestion would be to make your shop name more clear on the banner. It appears a little fuzzy (or maybe all this sewing has finally caught up to me and it's time for glasses!).

[threesistersharvest]

Your right! I'm going to work on it today! Thank you!

[Former_Member]

i love your shop. Your bird houses are amazing, if only i had a yard!

[threesistersharvest]

Thank you Druthersbizarre! We put a new one up but decided we might want 3 girl characters- so still working on it but for now the shop name is clear.

[threesistersharvest]

Thanks OliverWave that very sweet! More birdhouses to come!

[Former_Member]

I think it looks nice and cohesive with a little something for everyone! :o)

[PaperHeartandInk]

I like your shop banner!

[Former_Member]

I like the idea of carrying "something for everyone". Perhaps put the main foci of the shop (applique bags, birdhouses, and fleece hats) in the first line of the shop description, so it shows up immediately. The story of the shop is interesting, but the little preview that shows on the main shop page really needs to grab attention and make us want to read more.

And as I type this, I wonder what mine looks like? Hmmm, maybe time for some self-editing!

[threesistersharvest]

Thank you pickle lady farm! Great suggestions! We are working on story for shop and all three of us need to combine our stories, so were working on that. I will change the first line to show all we offer, great ideas!

[threesistersharvest]

Thank you sweet and sassy sewing! Were adding more items, just to give us a wider range!

[threesistersharvest]

Thank you sassyfrass123! We just put up that banner until we find something unique- working on 3 funny faced ladies! I would love it for people to get a smile when they enter our shop!

[Former_Member]

I think you did an awesome job. I agree with druthersbizzare though.. Your banner could use some work. I had mine professionally done... I'm computer illiterate

[Former_Member]

I'm not a fan of the angle on your large totes. I feel like I'm having to look down at the detail. I would lay them flat like you do in a couple of the other pictures.

[threesistersharvest]

CreationsMT, thank you I will talk to the girls about it and check yours out.

[threesistersharvest]

TrevTrevDesigns. I never thought of that. I'm not the best photographer, but we did take other angles so i will replace the ones standing and see how that looks! Thank you for your thoughts!