Criticism of the store for a beginner

[Timofeushka]

Welcome to all participants of the team, I was recently on Etsy. The opening of the store in late January. But until now, no one sale. I will be very grateful for any criticism, because I want to improve. I appreciate your attention! I would like to know the opinion of others. Thanks in advance.

[Former_Member]

You have lovely items, but you need to use all 5 images. You are marketing it as a card, yet your descriptions sound more like a small picture? So does it open like a card? That is very confusing. If it is an actual card, show a picture propped open and show in the back as well. If it is a card, does it come with an envelope? If people are going to spend $5 on a card and $2 on shipping it better come with an envelope that fits it perfectly.

You really need to change up your titles. Putting the exact same title with a slightly different ending is going to look spammy to Google and you may not show up on searches. Make sure you are using all 13 tags and giving them 2-3 words in each one.

It would also be nice to see dimensions in inches too :)

Your artwork is beautiful!

[Timofeushka]

Elizabeth, many thanks for the comment, for me it is important and necessary. I'll work on the disadvantages to which you pointed out to me. I also thought about the fact that buyers may want to print, rather than the original (I see that all the sold print, for what reason I do not know).