Could I Get Honest Feedback

I just listed a couple of new things and they barely got noticed. I thought I had titles and tags figured out, but I'm not getting traffic to get many sales. Any advice, comments or convo would be greatly appreciated.
https://www.etsy.com/listing/154502801/bohemian-brass-earrings-with-purple?ref=shop_home_active
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didya know that for any given search, the first group of results all have their tags repeated exactly in the title??

you do that 2x mebbe 3, I forget

out of 13

not good

especially for jewelry.

you are near invisible in search.
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I'm not sure I follow: I use all the words I've put in my title into my tags using more than one word, i.e.,
bohemian earrings
turquoise earrings
brass earrings
turquoise jewelry
wirework jewelry

How does that make me invisible?
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you have brass between bohemian and earrings.
so
at least the first 20 pages have "Bohemian earrings" in both tags ant tiles EXACTLY with no words in between
they go first

each phrase has to be Exact, and the words Consecutive with no other words in between.

to make things easy, your tags are fine, so use them to make a title without changing the order of the words.


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Go in the opposite direction. Take your very best tags and those in your title exactly. Don't try to make a snazzy sentence, just put the most descriptive tags in a logical order.

That way when the search is searching, it will find that phrase TWICE and go "Whoa! She really means it!" and put you at the top of the search.
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I also love Bohemian style.....but I would NEVER search Bohemian----I would search Boho.

Wirework on these earrings are gorgeous.

The hand pic is good...but I could see them better on an ear....model or mannequin.
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My brain hurts! I see titles and tags done so many different ways but other shops don't seem to be hurt by it. One person says to write for people, then someone else says search engines don't care. But people still have to read and understand the title or they're turned off by it. Some people say shorten the titles and others say throw the kitchen sink at it...my shop's a mess of different methods as I try to see how changing affects my searchability and relevancy.

Edited to add: Thanks Sam. I've held off on using my jewelry on a model because I've read some people see the "yuck" factor in that. If I could find a cheap mannequin...
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you can make them readable and still be relevant for the phrases you think are important.

but

they have to be repeated in both places or else you will be buried deeper than jimmy hoffa
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Alex-LOL @ Jimmy Hoffa
I'm even more confused after reading back through this and looking at Cindylou's listings to see how she does it. I'm going to re-read through SEO. I've spent so much time on this and when I think I've understood it, I don't.
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Cindy says not to use her listings as an example because she is always running tests.

Just use multiple words as tags, ones that people use as searches.

Then put those exact phrases in your title.
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Side comment, I can't help with SEO, my views are probably much less...
but, your shop looks great! I kept scrolling through to see what color grouping you would have next, like it!
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@Sarah-thanks for the compliment! I did it thinking it would help with the cohesiveness of my shops since I love so many styles and colors of jewelry. I'm not sure it helps but it is more pleasing on the eye. Then I have to rearrange things when I renew and new listings sit on the front page for a while not matching the color group.
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I can't give you any advice on seo or keywords because i haven't found the magical mix of words yet. I can however say that I love your new items... the turquoise and coral are especially lovely. Your Boho wire wrapped earrings are great! Is that a new technique for you? You should definitely do more! Wire wrapping is definitely hot right now and those earrings would definitely be unique to your shop! I wish you Good Luck & Good Sales! :)
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Thank you for your suggestion on the earrings, Tracey! It is a new technique for me and I do plan on using it again.

I've changed the title and tags a little after trying the google adword tool - can anyone tell me if I made it better?
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I'm where you are Sandi, seems the more I read, the more confused I get, because like you said, it seems contradictory! You have a lovely shop, nice photos!
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I personally wouldn't search for 'purple amethyst' if someone knows what amethyst is well enough to use it for a search term, they probably know it's purple so maybe use that space for a more varied tag!
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