Can I get a critique? Need help with pricing and descriptions...

[Former_Member]

I have only had my store a month. Gotten a few views no sales. I know sometimes it takes time but wondering if prices are to high or disscriptions not appealing.....

If you see anything else that needs work please let me know. All opinions are welcome and helpful

thank you
Kelli

[Former_Member]

Hi, I am from Mass too! I looked at your listings and I think that the price is not too high. I think what happens is that it gets last in the huge number of jewelry on Etsy. Also I had my store open for 4 months now and have 3 sales and some custom orders only. It just takes time and from what I understand it depends on you/me how much traffic we drive to our Etsy shop. While marketing I was able to sell couple of items to friends of my friends and also got asked by butique to put my items there! Don't give up!

[ScrapsofLuv]

@kelliscreationsforu-

Just looked around your shop and here are my suggestions:
Shop Title needs improved
Shop Announcement- missing, need one
Item titles- could use some tweaking for improved relevancy and SEO
Item descriptions- too brief
Tags- need improved for relevancy
Profile- too brief
Policies- too brief
Photos-too dark, need better backgrounds
Spelling errors throughout entire listing

All of these points could be easily fixed with a little bit of work. If you would like a more in depth shop analysis, I provide shop reviews free of charge. If you would like me to review your shop, just send me a convo and I will add you to my schedule.

For examples of my in depth reviews check out the "Beginning SEO" team posts, there are several of my most recent listings there under the "Confused about repeating...." thread.

I look forward to hearing from you.
-pat