Phanie:
I am worried that your background is a little too busy. It detracts from the text, which should be the star.
Also, your title text is purple, which blends into the pink/lavender of the background. You need contrasting colors in order for the eye to separate them better.
I can see that you spent a long time working on the background. I just hope this is helpful.
Best,
Alexia, Porcuprints