Hi Emily, good work! Two things that I noticed from just a quick glance. First, I see that you used the tag "girls and womens" in at least one listing (I'm assuming others). However, I have never even considered typing the phrase "girls and womens" into a search bar. I am usually searching for one or the other, and I would guess that most people do the same thing. So I would separate those two things. Maybe use "Gift for women" instead, or something like that. That would get many more hits than "girls and womens".
Also, a lot of your photos are a bit dark. Have you tried brightening them in Photoshop of PicMonkey? I am awful at taking photos so I ALWAYS have to brighten. And even then they don't always look great. It's a struggle, for sure!!