About page critique?

[Former_Member]

I just finished my shop's "about" page...thoughts?!

I'm having a re-opening sale as well (kind of neglected my shop this year, eek!) and have a new tagline/new shop graphics as well, getting those made right now so the shop is closed currently BUT this is the new tagline:

"Simply Chic Hair Accessory Holders Taylor Made For Your Wee One"

Since the inspiration for my shop was my daughter, Taylor, thought it was cute to add her name in there! Thoughts?!

TIA!! :)

[isewcute]

Very cute! I think this about section idea etsy came up with is genius! I love hearing where it all began & what inspires folks to do what they do.

Thoughts about the tag line...if folks don't read your about section first, they may think you spelled tailor-made wrong...but I think it's an adorable twist & as a mom get why you did it.

:)

[Former_Member]

June- Didn't think of the misspelling issue...haha!! Oh well! I love this new idea too! Any idea how I can incorporate her name to where people would see it in my shop?

[isewcute]

I think it's lovely you included a photo of her right in the about section & mentioned in the caption that Taylor was your inspiration!

[Former_Member]

Thanks June!

[Former_Member]

Working on my about page. I haven't added photos yet but any thoughts about how it looks so far?

[HolidaySpiritsDecor]

Dena,
Your about page is adorable! Good luck with your re-opening sale!