2 Negative and 2 Negative things about my store

[Former_Member]

I would love to hear 2 negative things (that way I would improve it) and 2 positive things about my store....We can continue doing with the store above.

What do you think?

[Former_Member]

Hey there Luz!

Negative:
1) Your item descriptions could use a little more elaboration. Some one suggested to me that I explain what made each listing unique. Instead of just listing what the jewelry is made of and the size, try adding things like what the purchase could be used for(enhancing every outfit, great for Summer parties, great gifts, etc). Use rich descriptive language to engage a buyer.

2) I can't really think of anything else. Your shop looks great! Maybe try increasing the amount of listings? You could do this by selling things in sets(example: earrings and necklace together for a different price). This might draw more attention.

Positive:
1) Your pictures are stunning! Really great use of photography and models. Your items are showcased nicely!

2) You have a great variety of products. I think this really helps keep buyers interested in your store. I'm working on this one in my shop as well.

Keep up the good work! Everything looks great!
Sandy

[Former_Member]

I must say you have a beautiful shop there ((:
I have to start with positive things.
1) Beautiful photographs, love how you use the white background and spice it up with the branches.
2) You've got a cohesive shop

Just a few places that you could improve would be
1) Your shop banner. It's not as bring as the rest of your shop. And it might be better to have your shop name on it, just a suggestion.
2) You've got beautiful items. It will help you more if you write more descriptive info about them. You know, the kind of description that 'seduces' your potential customers *winks*

You have a beautiful shop there, keep it up (:

[Former_Member]

Wow, Khin - you have a pretty amazing shop! :)
Postive things:
1) Beautiful photographs - I love the nice, simple backgrounds.
I especially like this one. Nice shallow depth of field:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/95790904/crochet-bookmark-flower-in-purple-and
2) Nice, cohesive shop. All the items fit together and also fit with your shop banner.

Things you could work on:
1) Maybe try adding more items to your shop. I know it can be pretty hard (I'm still working on it), but I think its very important and it really helps getting found more in search)
2) Can't really think of much else. :( Maybe be a little more descriptive in your titles?

Good luck with your shop!! I love your about page, too. :)