Critique list

[#1]

Hello,

This thread is to post your shop link and the words critique me. By doing so each shop in this thread will systematically be critiqued by all those in the team.

I will systematically open up new threads for each shop to be critiqued.

Please no personal promotion only post your shop link and the words (Critique me)

If everyone works together and follows the rules we will all benefit greatly by receiving much needed feedback that may prove useful in increasing sales.

[eshopping]

Help me improve, thanks

https://www.etsy.com/shop/eshopping

[PaHaRa]

Critique me please!Thanks

https://www.etsy.com/shop/PaHaRa

[Former_Member]

Critique me please :)

https://www.etsy.com/shop/BeJeweledByCandi

[frockfollies]

Please critique me: https://www.etsy.com/uk/shop/frockfollies?ref=si_shop

[KaurtureInc]

Please critique me. Thank you.

https://www.etsy.com/shop/KaurtureInc?ref=si_shop

[Former_Member]

https://www.etsy.com/listing/185560130/galata-tower-istanbul?
https://www.etsy.com/listing/185059826/beautiful-colorful-buds-photography-fine?
https://www.etsy.com/listing/184941958/nature-photographysweet-daisyflower?

[LePetitTiger]

https://www.etsy.com/shop/LimbTrim

Critique me!

[JoellaCrochet]

https://www.etsy.com/shop/JoellaCrochet

Critique me

[Former_Member]

Www.etsy.com/shop/lmmboutique critique me

[Former_Member]

Lisa MacDonald:
I see a couple of things that you might think about.
- Your shop banner says something completely different than your store name which is confusing
- I don't know who the dresses are for or how they look on the individual. I love the bright colors and fabrics and think they might be for children but maybe a photo of children wearing the dresses would be good.
-The picture of your in your wedding dress is beautiful but you might also consider a picture of one of the dresses on a model to key people right in to what you are selling.
- Again with the banner, I really don't see it as a banner unless it's in use, the same as the camera strap.
It looks like you have a lot of sales or a good number (more than me anyway but sell jewelry and everybody sells jewelry)
Anyway, good luck.

[Former_Member]

Melissa,
Super cute baby stuff. I love the diaper covers and bright colors. What fun you must have creating these little items. My first thought was, what kind of yarn does she use? Is it soft enough for a tiny baby?
So you might want to consider including that in your description.
I love the title and how you say what it is you make and do.
Your banner is bright and beautiful and you carry the theme in your shop image. I'm thinking I may do that myself.
Good luck.

[Former_Member]

Karen from Limbtrim:
Great idea. I love the ombre mason jars. But... I don't know if they are dishwasher safe or if the paint will come off on my hand after time and what exactly is the paint made of? So, maybe including that in your description would be helpful.
Like me, you love color.
The pet portraits are great too.
Good luck

[Former_Member]

Oops, I'm supposed to put somewhere else but I can't find the link. Can you cut and paste for me?

[JoellaCrochet]

Thanks for your feedback Annie!! : 0 )

[Former_Member]

https://www.etsy.com/shop/ZzzonkOwl

Please critique me :)

[CountryChicDesignss]

critique me please!

https://www.etsy.com/shop/CraftsByKabel

[Akmis]

Critique me, please :)

https://www.etsy.com/shop/Akmis

[Former_Member]

Please, critique me :)

[BangarangClothing]

I would like a critique please. :)

[Former_Member]

I would like a critique please. Thanks!

[MaddieBsCreations]

https://www.etsy.com/shop/MaddieBsCreations
Critique me please!

[Former_Member]

I would like a critique

[KaurtureInc]

Critique me please.
https://www.etsy.com/shop/KaurtureInc?ref=si_shop

[FourSeasonsPottery]

me please:

https://www.etsy.com/shop/FourSeasonsPottery?ref=si_shop

[CrochetByCaseyE]

Critique please.

https://www.etsy.com/shop/CaseyElswick?ref=si_shop