Nice to meet you Savannah. Your rings are awesome! Only things I would do different in some photos for variety is maybe have your hand on some white lace and such for looks, and maybe tone down the bright pink nail polish to super light pink or soft white as to make the focus be on your rings, not your finger nails :=] . ... and... add more keywords in your title for better search results for buyers to find your items.
In your title maybe add more keywords like 'knuckle' "silver" "heart" and the like. Put as many descriptive words as you can. If one of the rings has a heart shape, put "heart" in your title, and so on.
I have been on Etsy about a year now, as I "retired" myself from 12 yrs on ebay. It is a really fun hobby. Im sure you will really like it.
Best advice to get your stuff "out there" in Etsy land is you have to promote yourself within. In other words, be on as many teams as you can and participate in their threads. Fav other sellers items every day and they usually will fav you back.....start your own teams.....get into as many circles as you can. Etsy is all about promoting your items and if you don't, you may not get any sales or very little. THis is what Etsy is all about.
You can even make a short 2 to 3 minute video on what you sell and where to buy it, then put it on youtube..... if you do that, make sure you put your etsy store link in the youtube description box.
Put your items and store on craigslist too....and the link. Many Etsians do that. Good luck to you! Kathy