ecokaren
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Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Let's see what we can say about the photography of the item above.

Composition
Lighting
Background
Focus
Field
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Again, here is mine. Leave a comment and then add your item.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/88659605/white-long-jersey-scarf-shawl-with-lace
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Former_Member
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Composition: I would crop the top on the main picture (mainly to take the painting on the wall out. It seems to distract).
Lighting: Could do with more light. The light's feels flat.
Background: I think a colored wall might make the shawl look more dramatic?
Focus: Could get crisper with more light.
The white balance varies in other pictures of this item. Making it consistent might make enhance customers' browsing pleasure.
However, the simple elegance of this time does stand out as is.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/69325435/masala-chai-tea-a-spunky-blend-of-black
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I love the photos in your shop, this one included. I had to look for a long time to see if I could think of ANYTHING that would improve it.
The only thing I can think of is maybe to add a tiny splash of green, maybe a leaf to compliment the color of the tea.
Beautiful shot, though.

Most of the items in my shop are on a white background, so I'm looking for feedback on this one, which is not...Thanks.
http://www.etsy.com/listing/88055250/snackaby-dishwasher-safe-reusable
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2TrickPony
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snackaby is such a cute shop! I love your products and your photography is clear and I can see well what you make, which is great.

on this particular shot I find the shadows distracting, and I wonder if you have tried to get on a level with your products and take a dramatic close up for the first shot if you would invite some clicking. I love the strawberries peeking out of the sack! And then in the next photos you can show more detail pictures, like from straight on.

diffused lighting, like outside on an overcast day can really make your colors pop. the backround looks white to me from here.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/52365527/sterling-silver-heart-hoops-smooth
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Rachel (2 trickPony.) I like the contrast in your image. Very cool, and the silver really stands out against the black background.
http://www.etsy.com/listing/97215801/luscious-lavender-shea-body-whip
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Jo love the shots of this product - only the third one close up is not sharp and through this not attractive.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/93188125/necklace-chrysoprase-eucalyptus-wood-a
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Wonderful angles and details Martina. I always appreciate seeing jewelry on a real model as it is easier to visualize the full effect. Beautiful pendant!!

http://www.etsy.com/listing/91647173/rose-textured-beeswax-pillar-candle-25x3
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Your candles are gorgeous Michele!
I would suggest shooting them all from straight on, at eye level, for a consistent shop look. Also, if you could include a photo of your packaging or a mould you used, that adds a little depth to your business. Using all 5 photos is beneficial so that the buyer feels they've truly seen it from all angles.
Keep up the great work!

Here is an item from my shop.
http://www.etsy.com/listing/96861648/vintage-suede-shoes-peep-toe-cheesecake
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Vera I've been a secret admirer of your shop for a long time. Your photos are always simple enough to really capture the essence of the vintage vibe.

I think you could go one of two ways with this photo -- like your other shoe pictures on page 1 of your shop, you might want to consider showing them on their own as the lead off picture, no books or other elevation tools -- Or -- cover the books with something brighter like a blue pillowcase/sheet or similar so the shoes really stand out & grab your eye. Some of the details can get lost when the background fades into a light grey (with black shoes especialy). Good luck!

Here's mine...

http://www.etsy.com/listing/91032957/bookmark-pink-colorwash-faux-finish
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kootsac
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Hi Jenn,
I really enjoy the concept of this photo with the books in the background. However I find the background, because of the colour, jumps forward a bit too much and captures my eye. Also, the background is maybe a bit too busy. I would also consider moving more of the book into the foreground. perhaps a different angle.
So, I would suggest toning down and simplifying the background and showing more of your book in the foreground. I hope this helps:)

Here is one of mine:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/96836774/reusable-natural-silk-bulk-food-bags-set
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I don't really see a need for improvement in this picture. The composition is good, lighting is good and it is very clear, at first glance that the bags are for sale.

I guess IF I didn't know what you sell, I might think the grains were for sale and I might suggest making the kootsac label more prominent.

Here's mine:

http://www.etsy.com/listing/96016286/grocery-market-tote-bag-tie-dye-t-shirt
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The lighting seems a bit dull, and the background grey.
I actually prefer your other photos with the black background, the colors really pop!
If you do want a white background I'd lighten and brighten it (more contrast, more light when editing) this will help the colors pop out more from a clean white background.
I actually think your second photo would be my chose for a main image - the angle, the background, the color, and the logo make it more interesting.

Here's mine:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/84716784/recycled-metal-ring-pull-earrings
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GrowingUpWild
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Annabel~ I like the layout of your picture and your use of the wood in the background. I think the darker wood helps your earrings to show up better than a light color would. I might angle them a bit closer together so that the photo could include them even larger with less background but other than that it is an interesting photo.

Here is my item:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/94064251/happy-camping-organic-baby-cotton-one
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Kelly, I love the photo, but when I originally looked I thought you were selling the toys not the clothes. Maybe only have one toy in the shot and move in a little closer to see the outfit better. Also there is a shadow on your model and it's too sunny towards the feet. Not sure how you can correct that, maybe take the shot in indirect sunlight . Your model is adorable!


http://www.etsy.com/listing/88116812/magical-love-rock-paperweight-bookend?ref=v1_other_1
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

I love my minimalist pictures; do you feel they are too plain?

http://www.etsy.com/listing/73424101/eco-friendly-bamboo-necklace-echo-horn
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

I don't think your photo is too plain at all! Your item is clear and bright and looks wonderful to me.

I looked at your shop and for this picture, I'd include more of the necklace and less of the chain:

http://www.etsy.com/listing/73424464/eco-friendly-bamboo-necklace-l7-optical

I redid my picture per Anabel's suggestions:

http://www.etsy.com/listing/96016286/grocery-market-tote-bag-tie-dye-t-shirt
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Holly,
I think a plain background, something that compliments the colors in your item, would be great. The background you have is a little too busy for my taste.

The lighting seems good and the details of your art are clear. Overall, good job.

I'd really like to know about the black backgrounds in my shop. I can't get the whites to show white. I'm perplexed about whether to keep the color backgrounds or not.

http://www.etsy.com/listing/96016286/grocery-market-tote-bag-tie-dye-t-shirt
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Not exactly sure where this thread leaves off, I like Linda's edited photo above. My apartment receives poor light, I do what I can but my wet-dry bags haven't been getting much play so I'm retagging the listings and would love advice on whether my pics for this item are fine or not, thanks.
www.etsy.com/listing/94724389/eco-friendly-wet-bag-with-dry-side-bag
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Re: Lights, Camera, Shoot!

Hi sbb1 i would try to take a picture next to a window with a plain white background a sheet for example.I think your bright colors will pop out that way.

Here is mine:
https://www.etsy.com/listing/68820752/african-cowrie-brown-glass-yellow-jade?listing_id=68820752&lis...
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