Hi Indigo!
When it comes to titles, you want to make 3-4 word sentences.
Ex: Hand Dyed Silk Scarf (Don't put a '-' in between Hand and Dyed. It might cause SEO issues)
It helps to think about what people would type in when looking for your product. For example, Im not sure that people would search lightweight scarf, nor true-red scarf. Keep it simple. Ask your friend to tell you what they would search for if they would be looking for a scarf like yours.
Your tags are not optimized. You can use 22 charactors (if I'm not mistaken) in your tags. So instead of Boho, Silk, Red, Scarf, I would write: Boho silk scarf, hand dyed habotai. You need to maximize the words phrases to use as many diverse words as possible. You want to show up in many places, so diversify!
I hope this helps, but I will be posting more in-depth articles about this topic.
Cheers!
Jesabel & Matteo
the Pier Manhattan shop