Hi There, I just took a look. You have really amazing stuff. I hope these suggestions help.
Suggestions -
Focus on SEO - Long key words are not found in titles. For example one listing is labeled "ring for every occasion". I would highly suggest getting on Erank or using Marmalead free trial to hammer out your titles. There are a hundred thousand rings out there. What makes your ring unique and different? What would someone search to find your ring?
When I go to that listing - It says add personalization. Include a pic of what personalization looks like. I have no idea what that would look like on this ring. Your description also does not talk about personalization.
Talk about how the item is made.
Looking at your page - talk about the village/ people - remove the hashtags (they are not helping you in this area). People love to hear about how their purchase benefits someone.
Include a picture of yourself in the profile picture.
I wouldn't recommend paying for the premium Etsy page until you have a steady stream of purchases coming in. I have noticed not having the premium version made no difference in my sales.
