I absolutely love your style of jewelry The pictures are beautiful and whomever's red hair that is sets off the photos even more and is gorgeous! : ) The prices are fine but have some sales sometime! In the titles I would focus more on describing the jewelry instead of naming them. I tried to name my clay creations because I love coming up with cutesy titles, but I learned the hard way. I didn't get hardly any views with titles like that. As for the descriptions, I believe they're absolutely perfect.
Don't give up! You are definitely etsy material. It just takes awhile.
Join a few promotion teams like this one.
I also recommend trading with people! I absolutely love it.
There is an etsy team called tradaholics.
Best of wishes!
Rae.