ShopGift Critique

[Former_Member]

Hello team!

We're running our team shop critique adventure Monday through Friday every week! One of the team leaders (including the captain) selects 1 shop to critique and as a team we provide feedback to the owner of that shop. There is no time limit on when to stop critiquing selected shops. If you have any ideas, feel free to critique those selected shops any time you want since the time it's been posted.

The link to the new shop to critique is provided below:

http://www.etsy.com/people/ShopGift

Enjoy and good luck!

Natalja

[Former_Member]

Elena,
Your shop is lovely. I can see you put a lot of work and passion in everything you are doing.
Policies are clear, sections defined nicely, pictures are very nice.
Only ting I could suggest is to try using two words tags as I understand that is the new etsy search way.
Good luck to you!

Elena

[babbleon]

What an amazing talent you have. Your photos are nice and clearand I love your banner.

I might suggest using tatted doily at the front of your titles. Better for relevancy searching.

Great items.
Good luck

[Former_Member]

Elena,

Your shop is amazing and the items you make are stunning! Your banner is awesome! You have a great talent!

I've a couple recommendations for your shop. First, you could take the long section of your announcement and include it in the "Profile" section as it's better to use the shop announcement space for more catchy phrases and promotions.

Second, you may want to rephrase the announcement sentence "I propose you to Wares in the technique of tatting" as it's not very clear. Maybe you could say "I welcome you...", or something similar.

I hope this helps.
Natalja

[FairyLaceAndMore]

Thank you!
I will try to change my shop. Let's try it!
I was very flattering your praise. I really love their products - you can see?
But few critics!

[GirlieGals]

Hi Elena,
First I want to say that I think your shop is great and I especially love your tatted jewelry-gorgeous and feminine.
I was thinking the same thing about the announcement section, otherwise everything looks good. Keep up the good work!!

♥Linda♥

[Former_Member]

Well I think the banner and pictures look great. The description is very thorough as well. Maybe add some more tags to get a little more traffic on your page. For example:
http://www.etsy.com/listing/85283684/green-box-beautiful-gift-at-christmas

You can add tags like: jewelry box, for her, etc.

[Former_Member]

What an amazing artist! Your work is gorgeous! I could only make a tiny suggestion to perhaps make the photos more consistent. They have such great graphic appeal that there doesn't need to be anything else in the picture.

Gorgeous, gorgeous products!!!!

[FairyLaceAndMore]

Thank you very much!!!