Hi! I am new to Etsy so I'd love to help with what I've learned the past 2 weeks:)
I like your photos, the brown ones though I would say brighten up! Show the complete photo of them in the preview like you did with the others!
I have an instagram and that's my main way of tracking in customers to my etsy, you should 100% do this and learn which hashtags are popular with your niche! I like your banner a lot, it's very bright and happy!
Hope my review helped:) Good luck!
