Hi Karen,
I am about the farthest thing you can get from an expert on the jewelry market, so things I talk about will be pretty basic.
I took a look at your shop, and everything looks good to me :)
Your photos, descriptions and prices all look great.
Honestly, I think your sales have been quite good for starting in August! Jewelry is a very, very competitive category to be in.
One thing I noticed and wanted to ask about:
It doesn't look like you have changed your shop name, but in your policies you talk about quilts and a shop called 'Quilts n Jewels by Karen'. That confused me.
Personally, I would take out the mention of people being a tad impatient (in your shipping policies). As a buyer, that would put me off a bit.
If you are concerned about SEO and Relevancy, there is a team that is run by a Canadian shop owner, and I have heard nothing but good things about her and the vast amount of areas she is knowledgeable about and shares information on.
https://www.etsy.com/teams/10713/etsy-relevancy-seo-and-stats(I hope it is okay that I link that here!)
Not really a ton of insight here, sorry. But a couple of suggestions at least. :)
~Holly
xo