Hi Kaylyn,
I feel your frustration! It's hard to figure out how to catch the attention of the right buyers. Hang in there!
Here's a really helpful link:
http://etsymentors.blogspot.com/p/critique-your-own-shop.htmlIt gives super detailed tips and breaks down the different parts of your shop.
Suggestions:
Figure out how to stuff more words into your tags, and also the titles. (Read the info on the link above about those things- it explains how to focus on those areas in a really good way!)
How often do you re-list your items? (My sales are non-existent right now, as I haven't bothered to relist in weeks~ woo hoo, summer chaos!)
Do you spend time in the forums, making comments sometimes? I know I look at shops when I see an avatar I like. And people do look at the "Favorite an item from the shop above" threads. Plus they're fun to do ;)
Your artwork is pretty cool. It can be pretty hard to sell on Etsy, but hang in there! :)