description feedback please

[WaveSong]

I'm looking for some feedback. Reading my item description are you bored to tears? Is this too much information? Am I missing something?

https://www.etsy.com/ca/listing/212424355/unique-purse-tote-coiled-basket-carrier

Thanks
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[Baskauta27]

Tote-ally one of a kind! It's a good description. (I would take out "tote bag" in the second sentence so it flows better) The photos are great!

[WaveSong]

Thanks Amy. Your work is amazing, I especially like your love birds.

[Former_Member]

I liked your description. I think I would put picture 2 first so that the bag is the star of the show instead of the girl.

[WaveSong]

Thanks Chauca. Good suggestion.