Hello, may I ask for a critique, please?

[SucculentScribbles]

I know my layout's a bit wonky and will be working on that, but may I ask for a critique on the items in my shop and perhaps on the pictures, or descriptions? I would really appreciate it ^^

[Former_Member]

After taking a look at your shop, the items themselves are very good. I think you might have better luck having a model wearing some of the earrings or other jewelry. Your listing for BBC Sherlock Holmes Charm Bracelet/Anklet Season Themed has too busy of an underlayment and takes away from the jewelry.

I would say, in general, it is better to show the actual charms than the illustration of what it is. While it is likely very clear in your mind how it will look, a lot of buyers will not have the imagination to translate that to a concrete object.

Hopefully that helps a bit.

Jason

[Former_Member]

Hey there,

I love the fun little teacup rings especially.

I know this space is more of a critique for the art, but I think it would really help if your items were on consistent backgrounds. Some of the earrings get washed out and don't look as "nice" as they could with a yellow-ish background. Yellow is typically a colour that can get scary very quickly, so maybe you could find a paper backdrop that would have the same feel, but more white? Or if you have Photoshop, you can go in to Adjustments > Selective Colour > Select White > Pull Yellow slider down to reduce yellow

Hope that helped! Cute shop items!

[Former_Member]

try taking the pics outdoors, set up some fake walls if you want to hide the fact but you just cant beat the light