New here!

[Sageandsass99]

Hello I’m new to the Etsy game and am learning how to optimize my shop! I’d love a shop review. Please be gentle and kind. 
Also here to promote my shop and my listings. This is handmade Appa pottery bowl. Appa as some of you know is from Avatar the last Airbender. Now’s your chance to own your own flying bison!
https://sageandsass99.etsy.com/listing/1629441393/handmade-pottery-bowl-with-appa-from 

[Cabochonsforsaless]

https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543794636
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543787444
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543800024
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543791720
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1557968725
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1557985251
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543789390
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543797198
https://www.etsy.com/in-en/listing/1543793232

[LindasGeneralStore]

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1647387974/sofa-arm-rest-tv-clip-on-collapsible-lap-tray-new-old-stock

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1667761326/1940s-detrola-glass-tubes-tabletop-radio-needs-work

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1672302465/new-beige-police-navy-CT-state-police-Border-Patrol-&/or-NRA...

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1672250065/new-bugs-bunny-and-tasmanian-devil-baseball-style-caps-one-e...

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1663299955/new-st-patricks-day-bowler-hat-&/or-irridescent-kelly-great-...

[LindasGeneralStore]

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1673342513/pristine-mens-brown-wool-felt-homburg

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1658798712/pristine-mens-black-wool-felt-fedora-w-white-pleated-band

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1658798712/pristine-mens-black-wool-felt-fedora-hat-w-black-grosgrain-r...

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1659398136/new-espresso-soft-brown-wool-chaps-size-l/xl-newsboy/ivy-cap

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1659361926/mens-western-style-straw-hats-customers-choice

[LindasGeneralStore]

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1716615905/hot-mexican-colors-ladies-vest-w-craft-bead-buttons-size M/L

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1700984399/mens-southwest-silver-watch-band-with-turquoise-red-coral-&-...

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1662688983/unisex-hematite-religious-fish-pendant-on-a-black-cord-neckl...

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1680144259/One-Pound-at-a-Time-resin-5.5-inch-tall-grandma-on-a-scale-w...

https://www.etsy.com/listing/1691407182/1950s-petite-brass-bowl-with-heart-cutouts-&-flattened-twist...