I like your work, but I would try to arrange the photos so the close-up view shows first. It makes extra work for a buyer to have to do an extra click to see your work closer. After they are drawn in by the larger photo, if they are interested they will want to see it in a room setting.
This may sound like a picky detail, but believe me with the thousands of artists on Etsy, you only have a second or two to grab their attention so you have to do all you can.
Good luck!
